Monday, 6 August 2012

Cravings XVIII (Josh)


XVIII - Josh

            The factory was so empty.  That was the first thing which struck Josh about the dark, silent place they had entered.  Its emptiness was evident all around them, from the way the darkness made the hall they were in look like it just might be endless, from the echoing sounds of each footstep, from the traces of litter, rubble and debris which lay scattered across the floor in isolated little heaps.

            The only light came from Josh’s torch and the faintest of glows from the hollow windows, but it was enough to reveal other details, like the black marks on the concrete floor which told of the machines which had once stood there, or the evidence of oil stains, paint marks, blood.  An entire history lay mapped across the space.  Josh could almost feel it, weighing him down.

            Paige stayed close as they walked across the hall, the torch light swinging slowly left to right, right to left as they sought out some sign of what had happened to Charlie.  He could feel the heat of her and, in that darkness, it was a gentle comfort, but also an unwelcome distraction.

            “Charlie!” they called out, their voices echoing obscenely loud, as if desecrating the silence of a cathedral, “Charlie!”

            There was no obvious way to go, no trail to follow, no clues leading to the boy’s whereabouts.  A number of doors seemed to lead away from the hall, but none of them had anything about them that made them think that, yes, that was the one they should take.

            They came to a halt in the middle of the floor and the torch went round and round.

            And then suddenly there was something, a change to the light, a dimness growing, glowing all around them as it swelled from nothing into a familiar light, the light of fading fluorescents and the light of day.  Dirty glass now filled the window frames, posters and signs covered the walls and the air was thrumming with the sounds of machines and voices.

            Josh watched as shadows began to fill the spaces above the marks on the floor.  The shadows grew, took shape, gained solidity and then, as if everything finally snapped into place, they were whole.  Shadows no longer, Josh realised he and Paige were now standing between a set of gigantic looms as all around them tired factory workers in blue overalls hurried from one machine to another.  The looms hissed and snapped as they carried out their work under the supervision of a few more workers standing up on platforms at one end.

            Josh glanced at Paige.  She was staring around her with her mouth wide open, her eyes quivering with fear and then Josh felt it too.  Whilst they were viewing a scene which seemed so ordinary, so modern, the very fact that it could happen at all was a reminder of just how powerless they were in the midst of all of this.  There were no guarantees and no assurances.

            And then Josh spotted the boy running away from them, ducking through the gap between two looms further along the hall and following a group of workers who seemed to be leaving for their breaks through a door at the end.

            “There he is!” Josh shouted, grabbing Paige’s hand and breaking into a run.

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